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    In another life I was dangerous
    A brutal display of violence that lent me strength
    I took all that I needed
    Never caring of the consequences
    Now I'm a shell of that man
    Hiding in my self doubt
    I still feel the need for conquest
    But timidly I turn tail and run
    Crouched in complacency
    The world passes me by
    I feel their lack of regard
    An unknown flea on the back of a dog
    The only weapon I have now is my pain
    Perhaps I can stoke it and built it into rage I can escape
    You must be able to accept pain to break free
    I must find the path
    They will fear me again

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    You're a freak!--Eris
    You're a nut!--Jelymo
    You're a freak!--Tyle

    Are you guys trying to tell me something?

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    Something you want to talk about?

    Sorry, that was flippant. Yeah, I liked this one too, very real, very visceral.

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